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That first kiss, sudden, pure,
Raw emotion, love, the one she'll never forget,
Boy, that's when you finally caught her,
You had her from the first time she saw you
She really fell hard, that first,
Glimpse, embrace, kiss,
She gave you what was left of her heart,
After all the time, then til now, her heart,
Her heart was still shattered,
But boy, she loved you with every shard of that heart
Side-stepping her fears, she let herself love,
Love again, after the pain, betrayal, abuse,
She took a jump, not looking first where she may land,
Took a leap, let herself fall in love with you.
Why'd you leave her, boy?
Did you never stop to see the shards of her already shattered heart,
Didn't you see they turned to dust when you walked away?
She never hated you, never blamed you, it was all her fault,
All her fault again.
But still she hopes, she prays, to the Gods she believes in,
Even to the ones she doesn't.
And thought she's with another,
It's still you boy, it's still you,
Who holds what was once her heart in his hands.
It was always you.
©2008-2009 *Lady-DreamSoul
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Author's Comments

I don't know.....I really felt this way about him once.....He'll know who he is if he reads it. And what I'm talking about.

Maybe I really do still feel this way.

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:iconsakura-fan-1435:
ish you talking about Madi--- umm...him? o.o

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-hugs-
I know how you feel.
And it's a hard feeling to deal with.
But the thing to always remember is that the past is the past for a reason. And that the people in the present who care for you are the ones who are worth while. <3

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Just another alien on Broadway
:iconwriters-souls:
Oh my, I love it! I love the way your style sort of brings in time...I know that doesn't make sense...lines six and seven are what I'm talking about....how each suggestion in line seven could easily be paired with line six...and you keep that pretty uniform....I liked the last half even more -laughs- I'm supposed to be a harsh critic and here I am giving you nothing...I'm sorry.

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...if only two thousand miles weren't so far.
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-giggles- thanks Jen....what i'm supposed to do for a harsh critic now??
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it'll come back. I can even go through it later again if you like...but if nothing stands out initially it usually doesn't come.

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...if only two thousand miles weren't so far.

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